This is the kind of result you can expect when an engineer attempts to write poetry . Its the very 1st rhyming poem I've ever written . Haiku is a lot easier to me ...
I personally would never have a One Night Stand.....not that I have any morals or that I'm better than any one else,...but hey, I do on occasion use both sides of the bed and only having one night stand creates a hardship on us uppity people.....
When did this sneak into the mix ? I see you like them thar complex rhyme schemes . But tell me what you mean by "gob" . Was this an attempt at eroticism ?
This is the kind of result you can expect when an engineer attempts to write poetry . Its the very 1st rhyming poem I've ever written . Haiku is a lot easier to me ...
I like it ! The potential for this thread as a poetry springboard is alive ...
Nice touch ! I had no idea there was so much low class talent on NT ...
That should be set to music ...
Your modesty at self evaluation is appreciated .
To call, to rest, to snuggle close upon your breast.
To heave, to sigh.....
No! Not in my eye!
Happy days.
Petey,
I like it...
It's longing and lustful
In so few words.
Bravo!
Charming BF.......
That was almost romantic ...
That was a finely crafted work . Almost like a beveled jewel box ...
Sailor's lament ?
Working in environmental topics ... niiiice !
April fool's day is over and so is this thread . BUT if you want to publish poetry on other topics feel free .
I'm really surprised at you two, ....(Petey and Robert)
You both did a great job,
Certainly no prob..
Nicely gathered a gob
Without using glue or Haiku!
Pie
Eye
Die
Try
Rye
....ok; I suck at poetry.
I personally would never have a One Night Stand.....not that I have any morals or that I'm better than any one else,...but hey, I do on occasion use both sides of the bed and only having one night stand creates a hardship on us uppity people.....
Any poem that has rye in it can't be all bad ... Don't ask me to elaborate .
Chloe ,
When did this sneak into the mix ? I see you like them thar complex rhyme schemes . But tell me what you mean by "gob" . Was this an attempt at eroticism ?
LOL!! ...a gob of words. Words can be erotic, tho, I know.
This has to be the best poem I have ever read. Ever. No, really.
Across the room she sat
I swooped her up like a cat
I took her home
We were alone
And when we awoke she left
I hope that is just your warmup for the Sara G & A. Mac's Author & Poets Challenge ...