Snow angels! I used to love to make them when my boys were younger. Now, getting up without messy up the design was a challenge. Beautiful words showcased by a spectacular view of the mountains.
I love the graphics and the poem. The description of the feeling a snow angle creates is amazing.
(If I may, I would like to offer one critique; I would Change the word "thickly" to "gently". IMO,Thickly is to too heavy a word and takes away from feeling the poem creates)
Thank you, Jerry. Actually, I had "serenely" where you now see "thickly" before it underwent my poetry mentor's scrutiny (he is part of my poetry workshop). I thought serenely fit in well with the image of purity, tranquility and peace, but he felt it did not convey the density of snow needed to make a snow angel! I should probably have stuck to it, but sometimes, I give in to critiques, although usually after multiple ones from all my expert poetry group. This time, I just showed it to the one.
No FP "snow jobs" here … just thoughtful poetry and imagery.
Thank you, Mac, for the terrific image and the layout you did for the poem.
It's a pleasure to collaborate with you, Neetu.
Likewise, Mac.
Keep 'em coming!
Thank you, Bob!
Looks like FP snow-jobs are atop the board.
Snow angels! I used to love to make them when my boys were younger. Now, getting up without messy up the design was a challenge. Beautiful words showcased by a spectacular view of the mountains.
Thanks Neetu and Mac!
Snow angels are more real than angels, aren't they, Pj? I am sure your boys loved making them! Thank you!
Another great collaboration!
I love the graphics and the poem. The description of the feeling a snow angle creates is amazing.
(If I may, I would like to offer one critique; I would Change the word "thickly" to "gently". IMO,Thickly is to too heavy a word and takes away from feeling the poem creates)
Thank you, Jerry. Actually, I had "serenely" where you now see "thickly" before it underwent my poetry mentor's scrutiny (he is part of my poetry workshop). I thought serenely fit in well with the image of purity, tranquility and peace, but he felt it did not convey the density of snow needed to make a snow angel! I should probably have stuck to it, but sometimes, I give in to critiques, although usually after multiple ones from all my expert poetry group. This time, I just showed it to the one.
S'no wonder there is such beautiy when created by so much talent.
Glad you like it, Buzz! "S'no wonder" - I like that.
Beautiful picture and an inspiring message - a great way to start my day!
Thanks
You're welcome, Robert, and thank YOU for reading and leaving a comment! Glad it helped you start your day well.