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By:  Veronica  •  5 days ago  •  18 comments


The Tunnel
Inspired by the tunnels connecting the buildings of the medical center that employs me

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She hated using the tunnels to move from building to building.  She normally would go outside to travel to another building, but today the wind chill was below zero and she was headed to a meeting and wearing her puffy coat would not look professional.  She did not want the men at the meeting to have further ammunition against her.  They were trying so hard to oust her from her job.  The scuttlebutt floating around about her was demeaning and she had to work twice as hard to just maintain her position let alone to be promoted.

She quickly straightens her suit, slides into her dress flats, checks her bun in the door mirror, gathers her materials, and tries to not think of the scary tunnel she will descend down into.  She walks down the corridor and reaches the door leading to the tunnels.  It creaks as she opens it.  She looks around hoping against hope there would be someone else headed to the Nursing Building.  The corridor was empty.  She drags in a deep breath and descends the stairs.  The door slams shut behind her and she jumps.  

She reaches the bottom of the stairs starts down the tunnel.  She hears the door open behind her so she stops to see who was coming down.  Footsteps on the stairs.  She continues to wait.  No one appears, but the footsteps walk past her.  Her mouth drops open.  No one was there.  She presses her back against the wall of the tunnel and her fist to her mouth.  After a while she hears the door at the other end of the tunnel open and close.  She steels herself and once again begins walking down the tunnel.  AT this rate she will be late and that will be another nail in her coffin at this place.  Halfway down the tunnel she once again hears the door she came through open and close.  She hears the descending footsteps and once again stops to see if anyone appears.  The footsteps continue, but no person.  She turns and begins to run down the tunnel.  The footsteps also begin to run.  Her thoughts become panicked as she runs faster.  She trips over her own feet and her materials go flying as she sprawls on the floor.  The footsteps stop two feet from her.  She looks and her eyes go wide - a man appears - his face a was a rictus of horror.  He approached her and she screams - She cries out for help and the face on the man sneers.......

An hour later a group of five men walk down the tunnel.  "I told you she would bail.  She doesn't have it.  She probably ran out of tampons and had to go to the store."  Laughter.  Their gaze took in the piles of material littering the floor and walked around it.  "We need to call Environmental Services.  That mess may cause an accident."


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Veronica
Professor Guide
1  author  Veronica    5 days ago

Just a little quickie....

 
 
 
devangelical
Professor Principal
1.1  devangelical  replied to  Veronica @1    5 days ago
a little quickie

yikes. not exactly my definition ...

 
 
 
Veronica
Professor Guide
1.1.1  author  Veronica  replied to  devangelical @1.1    5 days ago

Are you sure?

 
 
 
devangelical
Professor Principal
1.1.2  devangelical  replied to  Veronica @1.1.1    5 days ago

... uh, yeah ...

 
 
 
Veronica
Professor Guide
1.1.3  author  Veronica  replied to  devangelical @1.1.2    5 days ago

A story written in 10 minutes - sounds like a quickie.

 
 
 
Buzz of the Orient
Professor Expert
1.2  Buzz of the Orient  replied to  Veronica @1    5 days ago

A quickie, but a goodie.  It had the desired effect on me. It also reminded me of this scene from the movie The Third Man.  I can just hear the zither music in the background of your story.

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Veronica
Professor Guide
1.2.1  author  Veronica  replied to  Buzz of the Orient @1.2    5 days ago

I have not seen that one.  I am going to add it to my Tubi list.

 
 
 
Buzz of the Orient
Professor Expert
1.2.2  Buzz of the Orient  replied to  Veronica @1.2.1    5 days ago

It is a true classic, starring Orson Welles and Joseph Cotten - should be on everyone's best movies list.

 
 
 
Veronica
Professor Guide
1.2.3  author  Veronica  replied to  Buzz of the Orient @1.2.2    5 days ago

I just added it to my Tubi list, so I have my Friday night movie.

 
 
 
charger 383
Professor Silent
2  charger 383    5 days ago

The haunted tunnels

 
 
 
JBB
Professor Principal
3  JBB    5 days ago

original

 
 
 
Veronica
Professor Guide
3.1  author  Veronica  replied to  JBB @3    5 days ago

Nice.

 
 
 
JBB
Professor Principal
3.1.1  JBB  replied to  Veronica @3.1    4 days ago

My favorite place in "The Park". There are a plethora of creepy dark tunnels in the assorted parks and walkways of NYC...

 
 
 
Veronica
Professor Guide
3.1.2  author  Veronica  replied to  JBB @3.1.1    yesterday

I have read about the NYC tunnels.  If I were younger and more adventurous I would explore them.  

 
 
 
Krishna
Professor Expert
3.2  Krishna  replied to  JBB @3    5 days ago

Re: #3: Add a few street musicians to the same location-- and you got a whole different mood! (This one does not work well with horror story, LOL)

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JBB
Professor Principal
3.2.1  JBB  replied to  Krishna @3.2    4 days ago

Remember, there is light at the ending...

original

 
 
 
Krishna
Professor Expert
3.2.2  Krishna  replied to  JBB @3.2.1    3 days ago
Remember, there is light at the ending...

There are a lot of tunnels in that park (but IIRC most if not all aren't really creepy enough to be a setting of horror!

 
 
 
JBB
Professor Principal
3.2.3  JBB  replied to  Krishna @3.2.2    3 days ago

Perhaps you would like it better with different lighting...original

 
 

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