Old Dog (short story)


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By:  kavika  •  2 weeks ago  •  38 comments

Old Dog (short story)


But it was the here and now for Old Dog. The wind was starting to move the branches of the trees, snow falling again, adding to the heavy blanket covering the ground. The temperature was dropping, adding to Old Dogs' pain.

Her body was thin, her once heavy coat was sparse. Since the passing of Gordon, her hearing diminished until it was almost gone. Her sight, once able to spot danger at vast distances, had diminished to the point that everything she looked at had a haze covering it. Her endurance was limited. Once able to bound through the deep snow, it was now a struggle to push herself ahead, one painful step at a time. Only her sense of smell had remained.

She was vulnerable, very vulnerable in the land that gave no quarter to the weak and old. Predators were everywhere in this land. In the winter the most dangerous were the wolves. Powerful beasts, that could run in deep snow for hours at a time. Bobcat, quick and agile were there as well.

But it was the snow and cold that were her biggest enemies now. She had not eaten for days, further taking her little strength.

Pushing against the snow and wind, her eyes stinging from the cold. Her paws shooting pain up her legs with every step.

She had to find shelter soon, or there would be no tomorrow. Either the snow and cold would get her, or the wolves would find her. She didn't have the strength to fight them off, and she well knew it.

Old Dog had a mission, one that she would not be deterred from. Behind her, trying to stay in the path that Old Dog had plowed through the snow, was ''Little Dog''. Old Dog looked over her shoulder to be sure that Little Dog was still there, following her. She stopped, exhausted and in pain, allowing Little Dog a bit of rest before they tried to move on.

Old Dogs mind wandered back to that day, the day her life changed forever.

Gordon's friends had come to check on him. It wasn't like Gordon to miss a gathering of his old friends. Their friendship, more than friendship, more like brothers. They had known each other since the early days on the Rez. All of them had Ojibwe blood running through their veins.

Old Dog heard them coming, their old pick up making more noise than a herd of buffalo. She ran to greet them, to take them to Gordon. Barking and running back and forth between their truck and the cabin, frantic as she was, the friends knew something was wrong.

Rushing to the cabin, they saw the screen that Old Dog had knocked out in her escape to find water. 

The friends pushed through the door. Gordon was lying exactly as he had been when Old Dog broke through the screen.

The men knew that their lifetime friend and brother had walked on.

The next few days were a blur for Old Dog, the friends had made sure that she was fed and had water, but they couldn't replace her spirit.

Old Dog watched as they built a mound of earth. Heard the singing of the ''Death Chant''...They laid her best friend in the grave that had been dug into the mound. Gordon's body had been guarded day and night by his friends. The night before being laid in the mound, one of his friends sat next to the body the entire night. This was a tradition with the Ojibwe. It was done to be sure that evil spirits didn't visit.

The day Gordon's body was laid in the mound, was the worst day of Old Dog's life. Nothing had ever given her this type of pain and sorrow.

On top of the mound, his friends put a ''Spirit House''. A small rectangular wooden building, many of Gordon's more sacred belongs were put in the Spirit House. Then it was over.

Old Dog didn't know what to do, his friends wanted to take her to live with them. All of them knew that they had a duty to care for those that were left behind. This was a tradition among the Ojibwe.

But Old Dogs wouldn't leave with them. She ran off into the timber and hid. She would go back to Gordon when they had tired of looking for her. However long that took. They were good men, and she loved them, but they weren't Gordon. It was with him that she would live out the remaining days of her life.

Through the remainder of the summer, she would sleep on the mound at night and hunt for food during the day. Each time the friends came back to look for her and check on the cabin she would hide in the timber.

They always left food for her.

One day as the season of the falling leaves was beginning, she was walking along an old narrow road. She remembered that Gordon called it a ''snake trail''...She heard an engine and hid in the deep underbrush that bordered the snake trail.

A truck came to a stop, the door opened and a sack was dumped out. The truck drove off, soon a small creature worked it way out of the sack and began running up the road after the truck. Barking and whining it soon ran out of energy. It sat there, looking at where the truck had gone. Alone, in very dangerous territory.

Old Dog watched it, as it wandered in circles, not knowing what to do and totally alone.

Old Dog knew that it was one of her kind. Acting on instinct, she dashed out of the underbrush and grabbed the pup by the nape of its neck, taking it back into the timber to hide it.

Little Dog didn't know what was happening, she tried to fight back, but the powerful jaws held her firm. Not hurting her, but holding her firm.

Old Dog ran for hundreds of yards into the deep timber before she found a spot to hide the Little One.

Laying there, looking at the Little Dog, she knew that Gordon would want her to protect it, nurture it and teach it to be a survivor.

Little Dog looked at her, scared and trembling, not knowing if he was going to be a meal for this creature.

Old Dog nuzzled him and licked his face. Little Dog remembers his mother doing that months ago. Before he was taken from her and then thrown out of the truck to die.

Little Dog snuggled against Old Dog, feeling safe now.

Old Dog slept fitfully that night, her hearing was bad, and her eyesight at night was even worst than during the day. She depended almost entirely on her sense of smell for warning signs.

The first light crept through the trees, slowing making its way to their hiding place. Old Dog nuzzled Little Dog, waking him from his sleep. Come, little one, we must be moving. It is dangerous to stay here any longer.

Little Dog was confused, why did they have to leave, he was comfortable and warm, snuggled up to Old Dog.

Old Dog, started moving east, towards the cabin. Little Dog stayed by her side. It would be a long journey with the little dog and her dwindling strength. Slowly they made their way through the timber.

Little Dog was hungry, more hungry than he had ever been in his short life. Old Dog found a small puddle of water and they both drank from it. It was food that they need now. Old Dog was hopeful that Gordon's friends, her friends, had left food at the cabin.

The sun was high in the sky when they spotted the cabin. Little Dog, you stay hidden in the timber, I will go to the cabin to be sure that it's safe.

Old Dog slowly walked toward the cabin, her senses were on alert. She checked out the cabin and land around it. She could smell the food that the Friends had left for her. Safe, she headed back and got Little Dog who was hiding in the fallen leaves.

As they reached the cabin, Old Dog told Little Dog, I will eat first, and then you can eat. Eat slowly or you will be sick.

Old Dog knew that there was only food enough for one dog, the friends didn't know that there were now two dogs to feed. She took two mouthfuls of food and beckoned Little Dog over to finish the food.

They repeated this time and time again. Old Dog spent her days teaching Little Dog how to survive in the north country.

The season was reaching deeper and deeper into the time of the white ground. Soon Old Dog thought, there would be bitter cold. She was hoping that Little Dog was learning. She didn't think that she would survive the winter, but she had to do her best to ensure that Little Dog did.

Soon the white ground was upon them. The days getting colder and colder, and Little Dog was struggling with survival. If she hadn't been there Little Dog would have died.

The food from the friends was not as timely as it had been. Winter made if tougher for them to get to the cabin and they may have thought that Old Dog, had left and was deep in the timber.

The days were becoming very short now, and the temperature was dropping so low that Little Dog was shivering all of the time. No food from the friends for days now. Old Dog took Little Dog into the timber they had to hunt for food. It was useless, Old Dogs' hearing and sight were too far gone for her to be able to be successful in a hunt. Little Dog would chase rabbits but he didn't have the skill to catch them yet.

Old Dog had shown the little one how to get under the cabin. There was a crawl space that allowed them to get out of the wind, rain, and snow, but it was bitterly cold, nothing could help them with that.

She had to take Little Dog and leave the safety of the cabin and hunt for food. The first heavy snowfall had hit. It was now or never.

Day after day, they hunted to no avail. Old Dog was suffering badly, her paws were frost-bitten. It was painful to walk on them, and running was near impossible.

They had to try to get back to the cabin, and hope that there was food, even though Old Dog was almost certain that there would be none.

Now plowing through the deep snow, with the little one struggling to keep up, she knew that her mission was in grave danger.

In the town of Ponemah, Jean-Paul woke with a start. He called the other two friends and told them he had a dream and they must leave for Gordon's cabin, now. No one questioned him.

Soon they were on their way to Gordon's cabin. It would not be an easy journey. The snowfall had intensified to a full-blown snowstorm. The old truck that they had, had seen its better days a decade ago. If the truck broke down or became stuck in the deep snow, survival was not expected.

Yet they were friends of Gordon's, blood brothers who, if anyone could survive, it was them.

Old Dog was plowing through the snow, eyes burning from the bitterly cold wind, she was shaking from the cold and lack of food. Little dog was near the end. Old Dog turned and saw that the little one had stopped, and was lying in the snow, unable to go on. This meant certain death for him. Old Dog reached him and took him in her jaws, increasing the strain on her weakened body. Together they forged on. One step at a time as the north country took its toll on them.

The friends were driving slowly, hardly able to see in the blinding snow. Each had their show shoes, they were Indians, woodsmen, and wrapped in heavy bearskin coats. They too were on a mission.

Old Dog, with little sight and no hearing, carrying Little Dog, was close to the end. Only her mission keep her going.

Old Dog was confused by the storm which was near a whiteout. She was lost, for the first time in her life, she felt panic. She couldn't let it show, little one would not understand.

Then she heard it, the long howl of a hunting wolf pack. She had to move, the wolves were going to close on her and the little one soon.

She was stumbling, stopping every few steps as the snow became a barrier that was close to insurmountable. She pushed on, paws bleeding from frostbite, every step was painful almost beyond her ability to move forward.

Then she smelled it, smoke. It had to be coming from the cabin she thought. Pushing on, now with renewed determination.

But it was too late, the wolf pack was on her. Yards away, sensing the kill, they closed on her.

Old Dog dropped the little one. Run, follow the tire tracks to the cabin little one, run like the wind. Little Dog didn't understand and she nipped him. Run Little Dog, run to the cabin.

Old Dog knew it was the end for her. Determined to save little one, that was her mission, she steadied herself and faced the pack. The pack leader was huge, over 100 pounds. Old Dog was less than 25 pounds, the weight loss from feeding Little Dog with her food, and the lack of food while hunting had brought her to skin and bone. Yet she was determined to fight to the end to save Little Dog. It was her mission, he was her pack and she must save the pack, the pack must survive.

The pack leader charged her, she turned, instead of running, she charged the pack leader. She knew that she only had one small chance to slow them down. As they collided, the pack leader sent Old Dog tumbling backward, then she used her last trick. Over the years Old Dog had fought many a battle and learned many tricks of survival.

As the pack leader went over the top of Old Dog, she bit down on his hind leg, for a minute she would have the advantage. She knew that the other wolves would be on her quickly, but she would delay them as they tore at her and finally killed her. That was the sacrifice that she was willing to make.

She felt her teeth, although two of her canine teeth were chipped off, sink into the pack leader's hind leg. She held on as the pack leader savagely attacked her, his teeth sinking into her neck and skull. The other wolves were on her now, tearing at her flesh. She felt no pain, as she clamped down on the pack leader's leg a death grip that she would not loosen. Soon everything was becoming a dream to her...Had she given Little Dog enough time to make it to the cabin? Did he understand what he was supposed to do? Those were her last thoughts as death closed its grip on her.

Then a chilling howl that shattered the air like glass. The howl drowns out the sound of the storm.

Coming out of the blinding snow were three creatures, wolves, but larger than the pack leader or any of the pack had ever seen. They stopped their attack on Old Dog, she laid there bleeding, unable to get on her feet as she felt the hand of death on her.


The Ghost Wolves mythical creatures of Ojibwe legend moved toward the pack. Each howling their defiance. The power of their howl stopped the wind. Calm descended as the Ghost Wolves moved forward, fangs snapping at the air, flashing eyes, their power unstoppable.

They were here, but was it to take the kill from the pack!!!

The wolf pack leader knew that they would stand no chance against these creatures. They headed off into the timber, not willing to challenge the Ghost Wolves.

The friends had heard the howl, their ears splitting at the sound. They threw open the cabin door and ran towards the sound. Little Dog was in their path.  One grabbed the little one in his protective arm, the other two headed towards Old Dog.

The Ghost Wolves were on Old Dog, she could no longer fight, but they didn't attack. They licked her wounds and laid next to her to give her their warmth.

The friends stopped, they knew what they were seeing. The mythical warrior of Ojibwe legend, Stone Hand had called on the Ghost Wolves to save Sugar and the little one.

As they searched the area with their eyes, a sight that told them that the Spirit World of the Ojibwe was around them.

Stone Hand stood next to Sugar, the Ghost Wolves beside him, protecting them. Stone Hand picked up Sugar and walked toward the cabin. Taking her wounded body inside, Stone Hand laid her on her blanket. Little Dog laid next to her.

The next morning there were no friends there, no Stone Hand, no Ghost Wolves. Only a man in his 30's, tending to Old Dog and the little one.

Well Old Dog, what should I call you. I think that I'll call you, ''Sugar''. And you, little one, what should I call you. I think that I'll call you, Ogichidaa (warrior).

Two years later Sugar walked on peacefully. Now she would soon meet her beloved Gordon in the Spirit World.

Ogichidaa and Gordon or was it Stone Hand, lived on for many years. The circle had been completed.


Authors note. For those of you that are unfamiliar with the ''Spirit World'' of the Ojibwe, I would recommend reading Basil Johnston's book, ''The Manitou's, Spirit World of the Ojibwe''.

Kavika 2015 all right reserved.


jrDiscussion - desc
Professor Principal
1  author  Kavika     2 weeks ago


Raven Wing
Professor Principal
1.1  Raven Wing  replied to  Kavika @1    2 weeks ago

You know how much I love your stories, Kavika. I have enjoyed them over many years that I have known you, and I never tire of reading them. The mythology of many Tribes is truly very interesting, and those of Stone Hand are my favorites. 

Thank you for sharing the story of Old Dog, it is indeed a great story with a very good lesson to be learned.

Professor Principal
1.1.1  author  Kavika   replied to  Raven Wing @1.1    2 weeks ago

Happy that you enjoyed it, RW.

321steve - realistically thinkin or Duu
Sophomore Principal
1.2  321steve - realistically thinkin or Duu   replied to  Kavika @1    2 weeks ago

Thanks Kavika, Great story per usual !  Always thoughtful and enjoyable.


Here is an old story about an old medicine man and young brave that I think of from time to time. You probably have heard of it.  

Story: The Hopping Stone Vision

February 23, 2015   by   David Sunfellow
Link to full story below:

(This is the task the Great Spirit has given you.” Another long silence descends upon the old man and brave. They both stare at the glowing red stones for a long time. At last, the old man turns to the brave and speaks again.)


Professor Principal
1.2.1  author  Kavika   replied to  321steve - realistically thinkin or Duu @1.2    2 weeks ago

Thanks, 321Steve. 

I have seen the Hopping Stone Vision story before and I enjoyed it again with your posting of it.

321steve - realistically thinkin or Duu
Sophomore Principal
1.2.2  321steve - realistically thinkin or Duu   replied to  Kavika @1.2.1    2 weeks ago
I have seen the Hopping Stone Vision story before

I figured you had Kavika.

I always loved that story it kind of reminds me of how I try to live, Neutral and open minded. And YES sometimes those rock get Hot. 

PhD Principal
2  Ender    2 weeks ago

Gosh doggit...jrSmiley_100_smiley_image.jpg

Now I am going to have to read this.

Stop making me have to do things...


Professor Expert
2.1  1stwarrior  replied to  Ender @2    2 weeks ago

You're gonna learn that when Kavika posts a story - it's a damn good one and, yes, you better read it.

They always contain great insight.

Professor Principal
2.1.1  author  Kavika   replied to  1stwarrior @2.1    2 weeks ago

Thanks, 1st.

Freshman Guide
3  Thomas    2 weeks ago

Thank you.

Professor Principal
3.1  author  Kavika   replied to  Thomas @3    2 weeks ago

Your welcome and thanks for reading it, Thomas.

Buzz of the Orient
Professor Principal
4  Buzz of the Orient    2 weeks ago

Kavika's stories are the most moving and memorable posted on this site.  

Professor Principal
4.1  author  Kavika   replied to  Buzz of the Orient @4    2 weeks ago

Thanks, Buzz.

pat wilson
Professor Guide
5  pat wilson    2 weeks ago

You're a great writer !

PhD Principal
5.1  devangelical  replied to  pat wilson @5    2 weeks ago

just as good as the first time I read it.

Professor Principal
5.1.1  author  Kavika   replied to  devangelical @5.1    2 weeks ago

Deja Vu

Professor Principal
5.2  author  Kavika   replied to  pat wilson @5    2 weeks ago

Thanks pat.

Perrie Halpern R.A.
Professor Principal
6  Perrie Halpern R.A.    2 weeks ago

Beautiful story... choked me up. I love the stories that share so much about Indian traditions and beliefs. You are a gifted storyteller and should be telling them more and sharing them with the world. 

Professor Principal
6.1  author  Kavika   replied to  Perrie Halpern R.A. @6    2 weeks ago

Thanks Sister.

Raven Wing
Professor Principal
6.2  Raven Wing  replied to  Perrie Halpern R.A. @6    2 weeks ago

Several of us here on NT have been telling Kavika that for several years now. And I am very glad to see that he is now sharing his wonderful stories for all of the Members here on NT, as he has been doing in his own group for years. (smile)

Split Personality
PhD Principal
7  Split Personality    2 weeks ago

Loved it again Kavika, thank you.

Professor Principal
7.1  author  Kavika   replied to  Split Personality @7    2 weeks ago

Thanks again, SP.

Sister Mary Agnes Ample Bottom
Professor Guide
8  Sister Mary Agnes Ample Bottom    2 weeks ago

Fabulous, as always.  Me...misty-eyed, as always.

Professor Principal
8.1  author  Kavika   replied to  Sister Mary Agnes Ample Bottom @8    2 weeks ago

Here's a tissue, Sister.jrSmiley_2_smiley_image.png

PhD Principal
9  Kathleen    2 weeks ago

This was a really nice story.

Professor Principal
9.1  author  Kavika   replied to  Kathleen @9    2 weeks ago

Thanks, Kathleen.

Professor Principal
10  sandy-2021492    2 weeks ago

Thanks for posting it, Kavika.  Made tears well up in my eyes.

Professor Principal
10.1  author  Kavika   replied to  sandy-2021492 @10    2 weeks ago

Thanks, sandy.

Trout Giggles
Professor Principal
11  Trout Giggles    2 weeks ago

I thought I had read this before. Even better the second time.

Great story, Kav. Do you have an extra tissue?

Professor Principal
11.1  author  Kavika   replied to  Trout Giggles @11    2 weeks ago

Thanks, Trout and tissue on the way.

Professor Participates
12  evilgenius    2 weeks ago

Awesome story! 

Professor Principal
12.1  author  Kavika   replied to  evilgenius @12    2 weeks ago

Thanks, EG.

Junior Guide
13  Veronica    2 weeks ago

I was moved to tears.  Animals are very close to my heart and this story touched me deeply.  Thank you, dear friend.

Professor Principal
13.1  author  Kavika   replied to  Veronica @13    2 weeks ago

Happy that you enjoyed it, Veronica.

Junior Silent
14  SteevieGee    2 weeks ago

So sad and beautiful.  Thank you Kavika

Professor Principal
14.1  author  Kavika   replied to  SteevieGee @14    2 weeks ago

Thanks, StevieGee.

Sophomore Principal
15  Gsquared    2 weeks ago

Wow, Kavika.  That is a beautiful and moving story.  The writing is wonderfully descriptive.  Your story really creates and holds an aura of reverence and deep spirituality.  I will always remember this remarkable tale of Old Dog.

Professor Principal
15.1  author  Kavika   replied to  Gsquared @15    2 weeks ago

Thanks, G.


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